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Deviousness `ChewedKandi has certainly gone out of her way to keep the vector community on the right path. Always making sure that her talents are infinitely scalable, Sharon has put her bezier curves to excellent use, and firmly anchored herself as an inspirational leader. We're absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for June 2013 to `ChewedKandi. Congratulations, Sharon! Read More
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In regards to the way it's stashing additional ammo. It's fairly reasonable to allow more than one magazine to be attached by from the available views you don't allow any form of magazine release to be seen so despite most details being there that one in particular is completely missing.
Another node in regards to the magazine. Magazines for man portable rifles and handguns are never thicker than 1/16nth of an inch, and in some designs are as thin as 1/32nd of an inch without issues, yet you have a insanely thick design. Given the perportions of the bullets depicted in the exposed magazines is that it's an enlarged pistol type round to rifle specifications similar to the VKS sniper. And .50 Beowulf Ar-15 upper recievers. While bullets of that size can be used for respectable range it doesn't give the feeling that the bullet matchs the purpose given by the fire-arm. Mainly because of it's scope.
The only real other things I suggest is moving the grenade launcher to under the hand guard so the launcher is closer to the muzzle of the weapon for optimal ballastics. This will allow for a bi-pod to be placed reasonably under the rifle in the launcher's current position without causing any faults in practicality.
And finally my last suggestion. A seam on the body of the rifle that marks the separation between the upper and lower halves of the weapons so there's more clear definition of the weapon sections. It's a tad tricky for bullpups but it's still feasible.
From a technical standpoint, very well done, high level of detail
I'm sorry for this little inconvenience, but that's the rules of the group. I don't wanna see your piece being deleted from the folder.
Go home cah, you're drunk.
was thinking of modeling a blender and attaching it too